Attrib. and other stories


Read 19/07/2020

Rating 3 stars

Book 7 of my 10 Books of Summer reading challenge

Eley Williams’ debut collection of short stories, published three years ago, explores the precision and elusiveness of language.

At its best, Williams’ writing is woozy and other worldly. She stretches, twists and folds language into unexpected shapes. She plays with form and structure so that her narratives resemble the weirdness and variety of everyday existence, both bumblingly mundane and searingly brutal.

There’s also an underlying naivety to Williams’ writing style that made sense when I read her biographical information and saw that she teaches children’s literature. Her writing has an innocence to it that seems to draw on a distant time and has echoes of the language used in children’s books, where words are portals to imaginary realms but retain one foot in reality.

The story about the boy whose father runs a paintshop is an example of this. The prose called me back to the books I read as a child, books by writers like Dorothy Edwards, Judith Kerr, Ursula Moray Williams. The later Williams, Eley, author of these stories, put me in a time before smartphones with feeling her words created, and it was a jolt when the boy in ‘Swatch’ used his father’s phone to look up a word to help him understand the shifting colours of his eyes.

As a child, I loved the dictionary. I loved finding words and trying to understand them. As an adult, I sometimes miss the richness of language, especially as someone who works in a sector scared to challenge its audience with the full breadth of language, so that I have to edit out words whenever someone proofing my work says they had to look them up. But that’s the point, surely? Or we are forcing a false aphasia on the people around us. Apparently, if we use words that people haven’t encountered before, without defining them, we will put them off. Am I part of an unusual tribe, then? Is it so unusual these days to be intrigued and delighted by language? Has it always been unusual? Is it more usual to be scared of seeming stupid when unfamiliar words appear?

There are words in this collection that I knew once but had forgotten, because language use in the public realm is so reduced these days. I had to look them up. Lucky me. That spark of recognition for a word temporarily lost to me, restored, is a gift from the writer.

Between these pages are stories of love, loss and yearning, of frustration, joy and despair. The stories are short, never outstaying their welcome, but they are also full and rich with living. With each one, it feels as though you have read something substantial.

‘Fears and Confessions of an Ortolan Chef’ contains an entire world of hope, defensiveness, love, lust and petty revenge, set against the backdrop of the illegal cooking and serving of ortolan. If you’ve watched season 1 of Succession, ortolan is the dish eaten by Tom and Greg as part of Tom teaching Greg to eat like he’s rich. It’s a songbird cooked and eaten whole with the diner wearing a napkin over their head. Williams’ story makes the horror of this dish both causative and incidental to the disintegration of a relationship.

The protagonists in these tales are often distracted, or employ avoidance tactics, diverting themselves with words, playing with language to avoid saying anything meaningful. Their attention span is sometimes too short for their words to make sense, running into each other with half expressed notions and feelings, smiling brightly the whole time, desperate to be accepted.

There’s a restlessness to the writing that meant I sometimes struggled to sink into the world Williams was creating, uncomfortable with the narrator’s discomfort.

I suppose what Williams is going for is how difficult words are, how difficult communication is, how precise what we feel can be and how elusive the way we express it.

It’s an interesting collection, the writing is clever, but I didn’t fully connect with it. Although, the moments when I did connect were gems of sheer brilliance that transported me completely.

If you want to read something a little different, it’s definitely worth a look.

5 thoughts on “Attrib. and other stories

  1. I’ve just read 2 short story collections which I felt were astounding. Both used language with enormous skill and painted pictures full of subtlety and words unspoken. (Written by Mansfield and Doerr) So this collection interests me very much. It sounds more contemporary and more experimental. I shall look out for it. Like you, I love discovering new words or being reminded of old ones. Our language is immeasurably rich; we will lose that if we don’t make use of it.

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    1. I saw that you had read and rated the Doerr. I haven’t read All the Light We Cannot See yet, it’s buried deep into one of my towers of books, but I am interested in his story collection. Attrib. is good, and I also recommend How the Light Gets In from the same publisher, written by Clare Fisher – that’s very experimental, flash fiction and took me out of my comfort zone in a good way.

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      1. That’s quite spooky – the phrase ‘how the light gets in’ is a favourite of mine and has been popping up all over the place in the past few days. Thanks for the recommendation – I’ve just gone to my (very long) wish list and find I already have it listed along with your review. Alongside I’d written ‘sounds brilliant’ Definitely need to get to this one! 😊

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